This is a strong and concise thesis statement--arguable and interesting. Because the claim is a bold one, it might help to add some kind of clarifying acknowledgement of the counterargument: "Although family life and economic status can play a role, the quality of a teacher is the main factor," etc.
This is a strong and concise thesis statement--arguable and interesting. Because the claim is a bold one, it might help to add some kind of clarifying acknowledgement of the counterargument: "Although family life and economic status can play a role, the quality of a teacher is the main factor," etc.
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